100 Word Challenge …Hard Beautiful Brown Worried Camera…

I took one step into the attic and the floorboards creaked. My Great Grandpa is dead. He was always so worried. I shone my torch on the floor and saw a diary and a hard, brown camera. I opened the first page of the diary and saw a photo of a beautiful girl and read,

The girl was the most gorgeous girl I had ever met. But she had to go if I wanted Jackie. Wait the door is creaking, the beautiful girl is in front of me with a gun in her hand. Goodbye…

My Grandpa wanted to kill this gorgeous girl. But she beat him to it.

2 Responses

  1. harguan2016 says:

    Hi Sofia
    I really liked how the first line hooked the reader in [as Ant would say it] and how you made it a horror\mystery it was really good I just got confused with sentence I saw a diary and an hard, brown camera. it was because in front of a H would it be an hard, brown camera. or a hard, brown camera other then that it was INSUBSTANTIAL!!

  2. sofiama2016 says:

    Thanks Harguan. I will fix that up.

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