100 Word Challenge… (Prompt is below in piece)

Prompt:

 

 

Finally. Time for me to make my birthday wish. I wish… What? You didn’t actually expect me to tell you my wish. That would mean that it won’t come true. Later that day my dad took me to the park. I looked at it and noticed something strange. Everything seemed normal but it didn’t feel normal. Then I noticed it, there were no unicorns on the carousel. I walked around thinking where they might have gotten to. It was there and then that my wish came true. All of a sudden a unicorn came up behind me and swept me of my feet. Best birthday ever!!!

3 Responses

  1. Heidi says:

    I really liked how you made the character sound like they were talking to the reader and it was like they were retelling a story. Good job! 🙂

  2. Nikita says:

    Hi sofia,

    I liked how you made the character sound like they
    were talking it was so fun reading

    💖Nikita💖

  3. Mrs Boyce says:

    Hi Sofia.
    I enjoyed reading your story.
    I loved how you built up the suspense. I really wanted to know what your wish was!
    Super work this week.
    Mrs Boyce
    Cork.
    Ireland

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