100 Word Challenge …Ladder Goldfish Flew Brown Slowly …

I was just in my room doing nothing unusual. Just staring out my window when I noticed the goldfish tank was outside. Something else that wasn’t supposed to be there was my dad’s old and unsteady brown ladder. I came down the stairs and just as I was about to open the door to get outside an unusual looking butterfly flew down and rested on the ladder. The ladder slowly fell onto the goldfish tank killing the goldfish. I walked up to the mess, crying, to take a look at my poor dead goldfish but it was no longer there.

3 Responses

  1. Pia says:

    I really like your story and the description that you have used. I think it’s an amazing story and I love the action and it’s really imaginative. Well Done!

  2. Mrs Neale (Team 100WC) says:

    Oh no! Poor goldfish! I loved how you have included the prompt words – very tricky ones this week! Great used of adverbs in this and lots of sentence variety too. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for writing for this week’s 100 word challenge.

  3. sofiama2016 says:

    Thank you Mrs Neale

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