100 Word Challenge …Although they ran quickly, they were still not making enough progress…

“Riley, don’t freak out but there is this giant animal coming towards you when I say 3 don’t scream or talk just run and stay close to me okay?” Mackenzie said.

“What!” Riley whispered in horror.

“1, 2, 3!” Mackenzie said!

Although they ran quickly, they were still not making enough progress to get out of view from the animal. Mackenzie saw a really good place they could hide, it was risky but it was good.

“Riley go left trust me go and run as fast as you can behind me now!”

The girls luckily got out of sight of the 1 animal, but now there was hundreds!

2 Responses

  1. Ava2016 says:

    Hi Sofia,
    I love the way you used the right punctuation in your story and it’s as if you made the character come alive!

  2. Eloise's exciting blog says:

    Twilight isn’t it I wonder where I seen that before

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