100 Word Challenge …Bridge Sprinkled Pink Daffodil Huge…

I was walking by the river when I turned around and saw something that sprinkled. I walked a bit closer to the river and all of a sudden a bridge appeared. I walked over to cross it and as soon as I started walking on it I noticed that daffodils were falling behind each step I took. Then when I was so close to bridge I noticed this huge pink thing. I walked closer and realised that it was a waterfall with a pink border. It was beautiful. Then I looked back to cross the bridge again… but it was gone.

One Response

  1. dalia2018 says:

    Hi Sofia,
    Great story but i noticed a little mistake. In the second sentence it says ‘I walked over to cross it and as soon as I started walking on it I noticed that daffodils were falling behind
    watch (instead of each). Good work though.
    Dalia

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