100 Word Challenge … Bricks Gorilla Yellow Running Pretty…

It was a beautiful summer day and I was sitting on a park bench reading my book about a gorilla. I looked up to take a break from my book and I saw this very pretty girl with a yellow dress running. Her blonde hair flew behind her. There was one question that kept popping into my head though, where was she running too? As she kept running I started to realise that she may be running towards the brick wall. Surely she will stop, I thought. But she didn’t. She kept running, and she actually went inside the brick wall and I could no longer see her.

2 Responses

  1. libby2016 says:

    I love the internal dialogue you have going here Sofia. We hear what the writer is thinking as the scene unfolds. Beautifully written.
    See if you can find the one error – it has to do with too, to, two and 2 : – )

  2. adelaide says:

    I love the way you use the prompt it’s very creative.

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